Capturing My Audience!

Kamusta readers,

This Term we are working creating a strong narrative. It has to be believable, consistent, descriptive and a strong structure. 

Yesterday, we were learning how to show not tell. We looked for all our action words and then we replaced them with strong words on this dictionary called thesaurus.

Here is a link to thesaurus: Thesaurus

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This is how we did it:

Here is a weak action word sentence: Rinaz gave Lydia a mocha.

This is how I changed my sentence: Rinaz kindly awarded Lydia with a delicious hot mocha.


Thanks guys for checking my new post! Do you like mocha? Make sure to comment and have a amazing day!!!

Poems #1

Kia ora
Today i'm telling and showing a picture about poems. Enjoy.


We had to use the app called Notely. It is for writing poems and others things. The first poem was about the ship, we had to describe words for the ship. We had to use 20 words to describe the ship in a bottle. Anyway I hope you like it. Feel free to comment. Here is the photo of my poem.