This Term we are working creating a strong narrative. It has to be believable, consistent, descriptive and a strong structure.
Yesterday, we were learning how to show not tell. We looked for all our action words and then we replaced them with strong words on this dictionary called thesaurus.
Here is a link to thesaurus: Thesaurus
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Here is a weak action word sentence: Rinaz gave Lydia a mocha.
This is how I changed my sentence: Rinaz kindly awarded Lydia with a delicious hot mocha.
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