Pages

Friday 29 March 2019

Poems #1

Kia ora
Today i'm telling and showing a picture about poems. Enjoy.


We had to use the app called Notely. It is for writing poems and others things. The first poem was about the ship, we had to describe words for the ship. We had to use 20 words to describe the ship in a bottle. Anyway I hope you like it. Feel free to comment. Here is the photo of my poem.


By
Labels: , , , ,

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Cassidy2 April 2019 at 08:06

    Hello Lydia.What a great way of learning to do work differently.I like your poem.The words you have used give you a good visual of what the boat and surrounding would look like.Did you get to choose to write about a ship or did the teacher tell you?

    ReplyDelete
  2. Mrs Cassidy7 April 2019 at 18:38

    Hi Lydia.This is just a comment to let you know that I have visited your blog.Hope you had a good week end and kept warm.

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)