Yobosayo readers,
(Hello)
About three days ago our class were working on language feature for writing. First we watched this video of a a 7 year old boy running 800m. Then we had to think that we that child, and what we were hearing. Then we had to write a list of all the things we were hearing.
Here is the list that I made:)
Then the next day we had to turn each word into a sentence. I haven't really finished that yet but here is some that I turned into a sentence!
Thanks for checking my post! Make sure to comment and have nice day! :)
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 24 July 2020
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Hello Lydia, I like the way you told how many days you were doing before posting the blog. I even like you turned the boring words in a full sentence. Ok bye for now :)
ReplyDeleteKumusta Lydia! What an awesome blog post! You have some really awesome sentences. What a really cool way to look at language features! Can't wait to read more!
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