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Wednesday 25 March 2020

My Narrative Writing :)

Hello Again!

I have some Narrative writing to show you today!:) But it's really sad for me:(( Anyway it's about a fox and a dinosaur! It's really interesting but SAD:(


Here is my sad but good work!
  Thank you for reading my post. Comment pls and have a good day!
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2 comments:

  1. Miss D25 March 2020 at 14:54

    This was such an intense little movie wasn't it!
    We will be re-working our writing tomorrow. Watch the video on tomorrows lesson to get feedback and develop your writing. I loved the detail of the action sequence you retold.
    Next step:
    Fro you blog post you could link the video into your post so that your readers can watch it and know what you are writing about!

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  2. Mrs Cassidy10 April 2020 at 21:41

    You were right Lydia,that was a sad story.Can you tell me what the title of the story was so I could search for it.I have read a lot of blogs from your class but no one has included the title?.I look forward to hearing from you.

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